Hello guys and here is another one of my blog posts. This very blog post is about Canterbury swim school. I do my best at swimming and it works. I get good feedback from my swim teacher and when I do something wrong my swim teacher tell me what I have done wrong and I say in my mind and tell myself what I should improve or what I should focus on. So here is a video of me swimming, I hope you like it bye.
Tuesday, 23 October 2018
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nice work but i think you can go through it one more time because i think some sentences don't make scenes
ReplyDeleteThank you very much I will make sure I will fix that up someday, so thank you.
ReplyDeleteSo how is good has your swimming gotten since we've been swimming?
ReplyDeleteReally good thank you I am proud of my swimming skills and I am really happy that you have asked me that. How is your swimming going?
ReplyDeletevery well thank you for asking so have you been taking lessons anywhere?
ReplyDeleteNot anymore it is the end of swim school and it has been raining so we haven't been in the school pool yet so yea. Thank you for visiting my blog and looking at my blog post, Bye.
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