Kia ora, talofa and welcome back to my blog. Today my blog post is about my wonderful dear writing. In writing I have been writing about my wonderful holidays. In writing me and my class have been working on a sense of place, what we can smell, feel, see, hear and sometimes taste. We have also been working on what we think of our writing, so its clearly what we think of our own feedback. Also our orientation, an orientation is the introduction and that is the start of your own writing. I am really proud of my introduction so I am sharing it with all of you and here it is.
My Fantastic holiday
It was a beautiful bright sunny day in July the 12. I was at the beautiful park playing with my good friends because I was really bored and there was nothing else to do.
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